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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Unfortunately, you had me to review your work so let's get down to earth shall we?

V:Absolutely wonderful sunset, just pretty, and the shading of the trees in the obscure back ground were really good. The shading in the grass is exceptional. However awesome the background and color scheme is, It looks like what a near sighted person might see without his glasses: I'm saying it's blurry. Your wings weren't as bad as you think they were. It appears as if your character is in mid-flight and that's an excellent effect. The blue one's neck is a little concerning though...it's kinda twisted. If it's your first attempt at drawing wings, nice! Keep practicing and look at some references if you're not sure.

O; You made them, so good job!

T: You did well, I like it.

I: Well done, use this as a stepping stone to further yourself. I personally like the image, and hope others may enjoy it too.
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